HI again last weekend on the 6th of march 2021 I did this race it is called the x race. It was placed in Thomason park, we ran down to the clock tower to the end of the pear and arcross the beach and back and i one my age group.
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Hey Henry my name is Jack, this is very interesting it is really good that you won the race for your age. For a bit of advice next time you could work on your spelling instead of spelling won, one it should be spelt won. Nearly everything else is great I hope you have a great holidays and come back to school refreshed and ready for a new term
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